Tuesday, May 4, 2010

SUSPENDED.............

I am caught in a DARK MIST..
am I really missed???
GOD!can you give this tale a twist??!!
as I am really PISSED!!


YA, to be honest I made a mistake
I wanted to give my skl a miss
but I didn't know what was at STAKE
OBVIOUSLY no one will expect a dismiss!


I didn't realize that it did happen
When I did, no one cared what did happen
ALL they wanted me to do was ACCEPT
so they never even bother to SUSPECT


am I really that bad ??
or is it that everyone else are so MAD???
CAN"T they understand that every wrong word spoken
CAN leave a heart BROKEN????


now, this called behaving dumb
taking away all our freedom
pushing us to boredom 
& calling it the route to STARDOM!!!!!!


Now,what I really care about is 
whether anyone cared to find my .......
WHEREABOUT................................................

1 comment:

  1. Your first poem(or am I wrong), just after you turned fifteen, that too a suffix poem. You are a natural. Hats off. Sorry about being suspended, though.

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