The
comfort of the creamy curd rice
Rolling
on the floor , watching TV
Using
Laika as my squishy pillow
Sleeping
through life
And
moving in my own jolly pace
Reminiscing
about a happier childhood
With
the same bunch of friends ,
Dipping
Fries on cheese
Unbothered
about kilos and hours
Driving
on my scooty ,
Wind
washing away my starting jitters ,
Sitting
with my special friend on the cool mud
Of
my Bessie beach ,
And
trying to tell him that
The
Big Things in Life are actually Very Small
The
montage that passes through your eyes
Before
any nerve wracking moment is
A
Random rhapsody of your lived moments ,
So
live your life friend
Like
the waves before us
Rise
and crash and touch some lives ~
Mistakes
make great stories
Worry
only about being true to your self.
He
smiled a quiet smile
Placed
his hands behind my head
Leaned
forward
And
shut my mouth in his style
What
was I saying again?
Now this is the heart's poem :')
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful way to be silenced ... so delightful one loses one's train of thought, being true one's self all the way!
ReplyDeleteDelightful indeed :)
DeleteWhat a glorious poem this is and how easy to enter it and be a hidden onlooker as it happens.
ReplyDeleteThese are all extraordinary moments of life really. It's our loss if we can't recognize them. And of course your closing lines are just as beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Challenges like these open my eyes to them!
DeleteBoth wise and delightful. And of course his action indicated that he both heard and heeded the advice!
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery in this poem
ReplyDeleteThank you! I am a big fan of your work , so this makes it extra special! :)
DeleteWow, what profound lines!
ReplyDeleteBefore any nerve wracking moment is
A Random rhapsody of your lived moments ,
So live your life friend
Thank you for this extraordinary write.
Thank you for the big compliment :)
DeleteThe montage that passes through your eyes
ReplyDeleteBefore any nerve wracking moment is
A Random rhapsody of your lived moments ,
So live your life friend
Like the waves before us
Rise and crash and touch some lives
Sigh.. gorgeous!!❤️
hehe thanks! :)
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. So lovely! The flow the words,lines are all so wonderful! This has to be one of the best poems I have read. Take care
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing my post'To a sailor in the sea' on your fb page.I am forever grateful :)
I share anything which i love reading :) and thank you so much.
DeleteThis was fun!
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DeleteWow - this is stunning - the flow, the pace, the ideas, and images you've presented and created, the lines and wording itself - it is simply gorgeous - clearly written from the heart and it resonates with an intimate yet very universal feeling. It's breath-taking and stellar - I read this again and again and I feel like the heavens - the stars and constellations have opened before me - and are showering me with a grace and beauty that speaks of -a channel flowing of Love.
ReplyDeleteI've never felt better about my writing :)
DeleteThis was really nice writing! Different style and much appreciated! Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
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