Thursday, September 5, 2019

Actually a diary entry

Some days are So big
that you don't need a diary entry to remember it
eons later...
The day you started your new job , 
and really rocked at it
and 
the day you got into a major accident
where your helmet proved to be your
shining armour but you were no knight. 

You drive back rather bemused 
that it was in fact 
all the same day.
Where you kicked estoppel's ass
and sailed through shipping contracts
and 
also pressed both the brakes 
to avoid hitting that jackass
who was trying to cross the road
recklessly running right in front of you

Knees and feet bleeding
Blood clots already forming
what am I gonna tell my new boss?

8 comments:

  1. Some moments are engraved sharply in our memories.......scary, that person darting in front of you. Yikes. Lovely to see you in the Pantry, Samyuktha.

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  2. Your diary entry works very well as a poem! I like the truth and immediacy of the voice.

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    1. And I still like it very much second time around. Definitely worth bringing back for another airing, and hopefully more readers!

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  3. I really like the striking imagery. And like Rosemary suggests, the truth of it all.

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  4. Sounds like an action packed life...stressful....now i have to lie down:)

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  5. I want to read your diary if every entry is as eventful! And is every page a poem? I'm impressed!

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  6. Lucky are those who have not had an experience with others foolishness that causes an accident. Those days are forever imprinted in your memory.

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  7. Now I'm intrigued. I should go back and look at my own diary/journal and see if any entry strikes me as a poetic piece.

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