Seize the day
Every second , every minute
Do not let the drowsiness drown you ,
Let that moment ebb away
Before long you will be viewing it from
Mount Nostalgia
Where powerful telescopic lenses
Painfully scrutinise every moment you wasted
Till you had no more
With the ones you love.
Things you took for granted
Will be pulled away without ceremony
You will be lying on the carpet
Rubbing your head
Wondering about gravity
The day your sun burns no more
Sounds like an improbability
Beyond your levels of comprehension
But it was always right around the corner
my friend
You’re just driving for the first time
Listen to this burned freak and just
Seize the day.
How true!!! Wonderful lines... Thank you Semi ��
ReplyDeleteWelcome ma :P
DeleteLove ❤️ it !!
ReplyDeleteLove the optimism in this!💞
ReplyDeleteI think it's better sometimes to let the day be free... you might easily be pulled away...
ReplyDeleteI'm actually doing that right now. Getting pulled on a free day
DeleteI grasp the message - but do people really listen to advise or do they live to make their own mistakes anyway? I do feel the urgent pleading in this poem.
ReplyDeleteSome need to touch the fire to know it is indeed fire. But warnings can at least keep them more careful
Delete"Mount Nostalgia" ... I love that. :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent point. I completely agree.
Thank you :)
DeleteAh yes! Wondering about gravity.
ReplyDeleteScratching your head
DeleteJust can't tell how I loved that image of 'Mount Nostalgia'. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Delete"Mount Nostalgia" Ha! A brilliant poem. Speaking from the parts of me that have already arrived, I see my parents of the age when this all is coming irrevocably home to roost.
ReplyDeleteThank you! Maybe I should have just named this one mount nostalgia lol
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