Thursday, July 4, 2019

Karuppu Da






Life in the Black and White
Justified ,
 aligned to be professional
Where is my Bookman Old Style?

A checkered Chess
A pawn marching forward
To become Queen
At the end of it all.

My Dog’s Coat is
Black and White too!
I pet her inconsistencies
And pat mine too
We move forward
W(h)ining & Winning.

A dash of grey
Can blot the white
But can never dim the dark
And that is why
I am a Black Queen y’all.


( Karuppu means black and Da is synonymous to dude in tamil)



15 comments:

  1. A vivid variety boxed in together. Loved it!

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  2. Bookman Old Style is my fave font. I enjoyed this whimsical poem.especially patting the inconsistencies.

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  3. Samyuktha, so sorry, I called you the wrong name!

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  4. I really enjoyed this, especially the last stanza! Actually it made me smile.

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  5. I love this! It reads like a battlecry :-)

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  6. Only white can be dimmed by grey... the dark is always dark.

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  7. "A dash of grey / Can blot the white / But can never dim the dark" - brilliant. And those last two lines...best ending ever!

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  8. I can almost hear the timpani as the lines shimmer toward their close--a musical piece!

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  9. You go, girl. This is awesome. :)

    I adore this line: “I pet her inconsistencies” ... and chess.

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  10. Well Black Queen was it you whining or the dog? Probably the dog as you were guzzling the wine werent you!

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  11. I really have a doubt. Is there a king or a knight or a bishop Or atleast a pawn in your life?

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    1. I have a more important doubt. Why don't you use your real name? You bloody shameless stalker. If you want me to take you seriously, stop being a coward and atleast reveal your identity. Anyways I have filed a cyberstalking complaint against you and hired and IT expert to track your IP address and other details. Cyberstalking does not go unpunished

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