Saturday, May 2, 2020

Liquid Heart


 

 ##skylover wordlist - Alchemy , implacable , knight , aqua , mask , aloof , almond , nocturnal , landscape , sting.



 

 

These nocturnal mornings..

A product of virus induced,

Unstable raging routines

Sting me just a bit more when

It dawns upon me that,

 

My knight in shining whatever

Will find it just a bit more impossible

To track me down.

My face covered with equal measures

Aloofness & N97 masks.

 


My implacable heart demands

An alchemy of sorts

Or atleast a reverse osmosis

Of this aquatic almond

In the centre of my chest,

 

To leak the leanings of my liquid heart

Unto the larger landscape

And hope love finds me

Before it is a bit too late.

 

I thank Kerry for her monthly word list. That really inspired me and I ended up incorporating all the words to make one poem. 

22 comments:

  1. At least a reverse osmosis of this aquatic almond ...

    Such a strong image. than k you for writing to my list and for sharing on IG.

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  2. I enjoyed this .. the second stanza left me with a smile on my face. Thank you for visiting my blog.

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  3. An enjoyable poem. I think we're all feeling frustrations at this time.

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  4. Vivid and almost fairy-tale at the same time.

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    1. Thanks. I would like to think of it as the anti fairy tale

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  5. Very good and Had to laugh about this although I can see the frustration "Will find it just a bit more impossible To track me down."
    Love the line "Or at least a reverse osmosis Of this aquatic almond"

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    1. haha mundane frustrations during the frightening pandemic!

      and thank you :)

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  6. I like the second stanza in particular. I feel similarly.

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  7. Ah yes, these are frustrating days. Your poem speaks fully longing to swim out of the enforced seclusion
    Be safe

    Much💛🌺💛love

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    1. yes! abd i'm sure when things come back to normal I'll be crying for these quarantine times :P
      Thanks for visiting my blog!

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  8. Splendid poem, and splendid incorporation of the words.

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    1. Thank you! <3 means a lot coming from you. I really love your work

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  9. Indeed masks can dampen the flames of desire! Clever use of the suggested words.

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  10. Ah, I think that this virus interferes big time with any knights' appearances anywhere -- masks or no masks, life under quarantine is not conducive to love! Sigh

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  11. "To leak the leanings of my liquid heart,"... love this! Such incredible wordsmithing, Samyuktha!!💝

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