Thursday, May 7, 2020

What once was



  



We are plagued by memories

By what once was

Ours to cherish

But not cherished.

 

To collaborate with &

Not compete against.

To break a for given bond

Without any thought given

Absent mindedly

Like how dusts of disinterest and distance

Began to gather over us

Together.

 

But we are still friends,

Still as dead water.

Of silent tears

Which were (never) cried.

 


28 comments:

  1. Ah, those memories, good or bad - friends of many kinds. Beautiful words.

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  2. It is good that we have memories, but hard to have some memories that plague one. It sounds, in this poem, that you are describing a friendship that is, for now, hibernating. Have a good day!

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  3. Oh, that 'Still as dead water' really got to me. So sad!

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  4. There is sadness longing and gratitude in your poem today a skillful blend
    Happy Sunday

    Much💜love

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  5. Very sad poem ... Hope everything will be back to normal soon! Thanks for visiting.
    Have a nice Sunday!

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  6. Uncried tears speak of such scary stagnation.

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  7. Sounds like the friendship has fallen prey to a virus of sorts of its own. Hopefully it will mend and be stronger for the trials.

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  8. "Like how dusts of disinterest and distance began to gather over us," this is so poignant!

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  9. And now we've lost touch, they aren't on Facebook, and we will just have to keep on dreaming. I have one in mind who must have dropped from the earth.
    ..

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  10. Still as dead water.
    Of silent tears
    Which were (never) cried.
    Beautiful lines

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  11. love the image. Thanks for visiting NatureFootstep

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  12. Memories can make or break.. I try to dwell on the good ones.

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  13. Lots of things have changed with thei pandemic indeed.

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  14. Thank you for commenting on my post yet again! I have commented on your poem already & hope to find you had written another! Do be well!!

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    1. Hey! I just read your poem of the reading list :) not with an intention for a visit back. although that is always welcome :D

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  15. So powerful, "but we are still friends, still as dead water."

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